Feedback wanted!

[kraiwa2]

Hey there guys.
I started producing D'n'B, not a very long time ago.

This is my personally best rated song. Still, I would like to know what some of you here think.
Please tell me what I should / shouldn't do the next time!

 

[IV4]

Get better breaks. In this forum there is a breaks exchange thread. Find one, splice it up and layer it with some other kicks and snares to give your drums more of a human feel.

 

[Catalyst_dnb]

The progression is really good, and it's clear that you've got a proper structure to the track.

As IV4 said try and imagine the drums as a whole spectrum of sound - at the moment they're in a very small tunnel. Add some more weight to them and a bit of extra percussion and it will sound infinitely better