Dj Jammin - original Bad boy (Finished track feedback please!!!!)

[Dj Jammin]

http://www.sendspace.com/file/xb3lnw

Tell us what you think

Tell me what you reckon of the second bassline pattern 16 bars in

 

[Fratanize]

EAZY fella.
Another good whompin tune mate.
The bassline is really good mate. My only critism of it is that its kind of chopped into seperate segments. Maybe needs some subtle ghost bass notes pitch bending behind the main bassline. This should make the sound seem more complete and not so broken up.
That is just my opinion mate. sup to you. Its your track mate, not mine.
I'm keepin it on my desktop so, i must like it.
peace