Multi Genre Clemens Heinrich - Subway & Halcyon

[Clemens H.]

Hi everyone,
I'm new in producing and was wondering what others might think of my tracks.

https://soundcloud.com/xantoy%2Fhalcyon

https://soundcloud.com/xantoy%2Fsubway

Any feedback appreciated,
Thanks and Greetings!

 

[luciduk]

you have good ideas with the melodies, you got some good basis, but ultimatly your gonna need more work i think . but you can do it!!

actually your newer track gloom is much better, i like that

 

[Clemens H.]

You're right, I finish my tracks too fast and jump to the next set in ableton, there are so many on my harddrive and on most of them I don't spend more than 5 minutes before I leave them and never work on them again,
so I try to spend more time on one track.

Also I'm glad that you like Gloom more than these two linked here,
I couldn't decide which tracks to show here, and my roommate suggested to try Halcyon and Subway.

Thanks for your feedback!

 

[bansal321]

yer more work is needed try this site for tips and tricks http://audio.tutsplus.com/... i do like your deadmau5 sounding synth in halcyon has that been side chained?