Yeah its ok mate. could do with adding a couple of little fills in the main drum part and maybe add a few effects just to get the ears twitching and to break up the ambiance a bit. Here's my latest offering...
I like it but the sub sounds a but muddy to me, maybe eq it a bit also cut the high freqs on the sub. I really like the idea it's very chill but the rides are a bit annoying after a while.