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[Kayenzo'sMusicBox]

hiya guys

check out my new song and let me know what you think.

 

[Focal Shift]

i like that break, what is it? other than that most of your elements are fighting for space and muffling each other too much. plus everything seems to come in at random times, unless that's what you're after and it's not intended to be mixed i'd say you need to change your arrangement so things follow more of a 4x4 16 bar time frame for your bars and phrases etc. some nice sounds overall, but needs a lot more work imo