Can i have some feedback on this work in progress please people

Discussion in 'Production' started by Dubsta, Oct 15, 2012.

  1. Dubsta

    Dubsta Well-Known Member

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    Can i have some feedback on this work in progress.got loads to do to it still but this is the basic template, got an old 2000-sih vibe to it. the layout needs changing as some of it is repetative.

    feedback apprieciated.



    Thanks in advance
     
  2. jimjimjim

    jimjimjim oldskool

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    easy m8 - wrong section ya know.
    i like the track - nice drums - everything sounding nice in the mix.
    but the bass is a bit soft 4 me - maybe crank that up in my general face area :)
    love the atmos noises and reverse cymbals etc nice vibe
    good job
     
  3. lostnthesound

    lostnthesound Burns Easily in the Sun

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    I agree 100% with everything jimjimjim stated. All in all, you've got a nice concept fleshed out, it just needs a bit more "meat."

    In addition to increasing the bass presence, perhaps add another synth in there, some type of grimey stab perhaps? Also, some drum fills and some glitch type noises would really help out.

    Finally, the tune is very straight forward and needs an injection of tension–risers, downshifters, a breakdown, etc., though I'm sure you're already at work on these elements.

    Keep it up.

    Cheers.
     
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  4. Dubsta

    Dubsta Well-Known Member

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    nice one guys.....taken all that on board, pretty much what i was thinking too...especially with the bass..it needs to be more meaty, its only a simple sub at the moments.

    ill post a finsihed version up soon
     
  5. prettyherb

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    Drums are sounding clean, i like those synths you put in the main drop !!

    I would just put the bass a bit louder and make it a lil fatter. Lookin forward to hear a new version :)
     
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    Music is an special part of our life.This is a good common sense post. Very helpful to one who is just finding the resources about this part. It will certainly help educate me.