Bad turn - critique appreciated!

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Bad man vibes right here!

Crying out for a bit of variety though. Would perhaps pitch up and down your break edits at the end of each 4 bar. You could also throw in a few drum beat variations here and there just to break things up. Maybe some kind of melody on a break down.

Other than that. Sounds Top!
 
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Bad man vibes right here!

Crying out for a bit of variety though. Would perhaps pitch up and down your break edits at the end of each 4 bar. You could also throw in a few drum beat variations here and there just to break things up. Maybe some kind of melody on a break down.

Other than that. Sounds Top!
Cheers mate will work on that !
 
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reall like the kick and snare, they sound very good. Nice track but as Wilko stated, some variety would do good.

I also think the intro is a bit too long by itself, unless you make something more happen in this time.
 

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Despite both of my fellow friends up there, I think the intro is at the right lenght, but for a LONGER track. Seriously, work more on those breaks and get it to 4-5 minutes and it'll fit perfectly.
 
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Intro I like, hats sound nice and clean. I like that little shuffle here and there. Background atmosphere sounds good aswell nice and dark and moody. I was expecting another element before the drop like a vocal or quote / perhaps a reverb atmosphere of someone speaking or some kind of scene. I like this bass a lot! kind of gives me that Jubei vibe. Snare I like a lot and the drums as a whole I think sound just right. I do still feel there needs to be some kind of background element going on throughout the intro and the main hook just to fill it up a little more although I know you're going for that dark minimal vibe. Maybe a synth shot of some sort with a huge room of reverb and a 1/6 delay but at about 50% volume just to add a little flavour. Besides just a little variation on the drums after the end of this clip and maybe a few extra bass fills!

Great work, looking forward to hearing the end product!
 
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