Ayala - Flying Rabits

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  1. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    Preview - Lemme know what yous thinkys



    Hat's off to whoever can guess what that snares made of.
     
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  2. jimjimjim

    jimjimjim oldskool

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    excellent work m8.
     
  3. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    that's a good tune man, that's a great tune even. Nice job
     
  4. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    Cheers buddy

    ---------- Post added at 14:03 ---------- Previous post was at 14:02 ----------

    Thanks man. Glad your feeling it!
     
  5. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    new version
     
  6. paracyte

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    How I love this intro and delicate feeling about whole tune, you can not imagine :)
    Great job with the feel of the whole tune.
    Amazing work
    Keep'em coming !!!
    Cheers.
     
  7. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    haha thanks mate
     
  8. thin king

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    serious skills congrats on a top tune
     
  9. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    big ups cheers buddy
     
  10. Nucleoid

    Nucleoid Nucleoid Drum & Bass

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    Outstanding song!
    I love the simplicity, it fits with the theme! :)

    Anyway, for some constructive feedback..
    at 0.44, and probably at the whole song you should cut some overtones. If you listen carefully, or maybe not that careful at all you notice that when you hit the bass a really puncturing high tone comes with it.
    I had it myself in this song:

    You can hear it at 0:55. It's even worse on my song, and I'm planning to remaster it some time to fix it.

    So my advice would be: get some kind of frequency analyser (there's one in Cool Edit Pro 2.1, which you can download with ease)
    and then check the peaks that are way above the normal frequencies you'd expect, then cut those with a parametric equalizer.
    This should probably fix the problem ;)

    Well that for the technical side. The rest of the mix sounds great!
    Cheers
     
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  11. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    Ez cheers buddy for the lengthy reply. I'll be touching things up when I'm feeling inspired again broski
     
  12. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    really like the bass man
    overall mix sounds really good
    have no idea what the snare is made of.lol
    nice tune man