Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by damienk, Apr 21, 2011.
Another Attempt, please comment on how i can make it better and were iv gone wrong thanks
Musically it bores me, would like the piano to have more melody, it just seems too simple and dry.
Would also benefit from more elemenst its pretty much the same all the way throught.
And i think ur bass is muddying up the track pretty much.
Drums are too weak aswell.
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