I am just a DnB Listener and I am not professional (listener) yet!
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1. No intro - 42 seconds the same thing from the beginning, it wasn't so pleasent. So it needs a intro.
2. First 42 sec. are almost the same, no surprises, too monotonous, but rythm is good.
3. The silence after that is very good and tunes after the silence are also very good, but lasts too long ~1 min 30 sec, I wanted some surprises on ~02:00 - it means, a little bit different tunes to the backround (a little change).
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That was my view of this track. It seems that it will be a good track.