First things first. The following things catched my ears immediately:
1) Its pretty fast for that liquid style. I would slow it down a few bpm.
2) The Pad at the beginning of the intro is awesome however this first high hats coming in really disturb the track... maybe lower their volume will help...
These is just my opinion!
Apart from that i really like the sounds and the structure of the track - well done!
I would say track is fairly decent, pads in intro and breakdown were really good, also I liked the bass sound. But I would work some more on snare sound and bringing in more variation as well. For example varying the bass melody, automating cutoff, introducing more breaks/percussion etc.