Drum & Bass Venice (ft. Lokka) - Your Own (Oexius Remix)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Oexius, Dec 23, 2014.

  1. Oexius

    Oexius New Member

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    I've only been producing for a few months now, and there was this remix contest for this house song,
    and everyone was remixing it to other types of house, so I wanted to try it out but something different (Commercial DNB I think it's what it's called?).

    Anyway here it is, please tell me what you think and what I could improve (I know I fuxed up the vocals in all kinds of ways but I'd really like to improve my production quality), thanks so much!~


    Hearing it again, I think I fuxed up the high end too ;w;
     
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    I hate bumping threads as much as the next guy but I would really like some feedback on this, please~ ;w;
     
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    Please, anyone? ;A;
     
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    studubwatts1 New Member

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    good shit. could bring the bass up a bit and turn the low end down. its got a good arrangement tho

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    i mean turn the high end down*
     
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  5. timeslut

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    this is a great tune. producing only a few months hey? ;)

    does sound a bit much on the high end, but overall- great arrangement, great vocal, melody. all around great remix.
     
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  6. Oexius

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    [MENTION=68968]studubwatts1[/MENTION] thanks for the feedback, and yea I felt it could do with a bit more bass as well, definitely will have to look out for that in the future.

    [MENTION=96390]timeslut[/MENTION] Thanks as well, glad you like it! And yea, I should've compared it to some other tracks before I released, I didn't realize the high end was so icy. Thanks a bunch for checkin out mah track!~
     
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    I think it's really good, but I think it needs more bass. That would bring out the track much more, but the other elements are great! ;)
     
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