Thin and Crispy - Inner Rage WIP

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Thin and crispy, Aug 21, 2010.

  1. Thin and crispy

    Thin and crispy Active Member

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    Something i started a while ago (the intro) needed a heavy drop and the marky n bungle remix of warning inspired me! anyway, work in progress let me know what you think, and yes the levels of it all arent done yet lol, THIS IS A ROUGH!

    Usual applies, criticisms good or bad etc :)
    /Thin
     
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  2. Robert G

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    I think it would sound nice with a tiny pause before the drop to add some suspense.
     
  3. Cat Gas

    Cat Gas Aka Basis

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    The drums don't really sound tight enough. But I don't listen to a lot of jump up, that's just from what I could pick out :teeth:
     
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    It does have potential, needs mixing before I can say anything constructive though, I suppose.

    Keep it up.

    ~Shades out.
     
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    cheers guys yer the drums are proper messy atm, but they are gonna take a shit load of work lol
     
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    Ditto the pause right before the drop and maybe after the 8th bar -after the drop?

    Sounds good, I'm liking the feel of the drop....