Drum & Bass SweetStarZ - Peace Review please :p

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by DnBnSmoke, Dec 19, 2011.

  1. DnBnSmoke

    DnBnSmoke Member

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    Hi guys, it's SweetStarZ. This time i come posting at the right section about my new tune I'd like you guys to take a look.



    Thanks you guys. Hope you enjoy it :D
     
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    i would recommend to add more variations to the intro. try adding more fx, noises, filtered drums, etc. etc. etc.

    the drop should be more dramatic... you could try to create a silence right before it or to add a explosion on the first kick. what i miss in the middle part is a solid bass and some variations with the melodies, noises etc.
     
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    Thanks for your opinion mate, tho I wanted to keep it simple not overwhelmed with FX since I had a pretty intense and fulfilling atmosphere running on the back. Anyways I'll keep it in mind on my next attempt to perfection :p .
     
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    More opinions :p ?
     
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    yer i agree with dieiscast.... the synths you've used sound good but its just too plain... try adding some chopped vocals in around, really experiment with them
     
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    You need to get mooooar sub in there, way to weak! Variations are always good too.
     
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    @bansal321

    Thanks for your opinion mate, I'll try to experiment some vocals around there.


    @SoveX

    Hey mate, thanks for commenting. Anyways, what do you mean by more sub? :p . Peace.