SuBKA - Paralyzed (Jump Up DNB)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by SuBKA, Nov 18, 2013.

  1. SuBKA

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    Here is my latest track. It's called "Paralyzed" and during making the track I gained a lot of experience working with NI Massive, which I was struggling with a lot at first.
    Was a lot of fun to make the track for me personally and I think the outcome is pretty okay, I gotta say, I changed the bassline and bass sound of this track like 10 times before I was pleased. :)
     
  2. Balthazaar

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    not quite my style,but i gotta feeling that bass is to loud,i would bring drum beat more in front of mix..
     
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    nice bass in intro, good beat! :)
     
  4. SuBKA

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    thank you! don't know if the bass is too loud though, I don't think the drums drown in the bass so it seemed okay to me. Just the sub is slightly too dominant, maybe something I will change when making a VIP of this track some day.
     
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  5. RUSSLA

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    This really isnt far off mate! Good work on the sound design! personally I recon there is too much verb on that stab at the beginning of the bar, work on the mix down too, slap a jump track in your DAW and check how they use frequencies
     
  6. Reloaded

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    I like it! You have nailed the jump up energy, love the drop. I agree that the bass is louder than the beat. It should be the other way around for dnb the beat should be louder so it remains prominent after mastering etc!
     
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    Thanks alot guys! I'm so happy to finally make some progress in that filthy sound design! :D
    Yeah, I realized when listening to it on my big speakers (I produce with headphones), the Sub Bass is too loud.
     
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    Dope man, subbass is too loud indeed haha. I like it overall! But, I'd pick a snare with a longer tail (one that fades out longer) as you mostly hear in tracks by Annix. I also just got into producing (jump up), if you wanna hear it: https://soundcloud.com/jordy-beckers/bringer-of-rain

    Keep this up!