[Style???] St. Alexander - Bed Bitten

[st. alexander]

A song I wrote when I had a fever back in mid november. Finished it right before thanks-taking. Not sure what style it would fall into.

:::Link to player:::
DivShare File - St_ Alexander - Bed Bitten.mp3

Thanks.

 

[ApeCat]

Overall, the mixdown sounds pretty nice, but that one synth that's droning up and down in pitch is annoying me, the bass [that comes in around two minutes in] is too loud compared to the other elements and there's quite a lot going on all the time, there's not a lot of space, no moments of quiet - not counting the breakdown and even that is just relatively quiet. Second drop comes on way too abruptly IMO.

 

[st. alexander]

I like the annoying up down thing.