STLLR - Dauntless

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by STLLR, Oct 17, 2015.

  1. STLLR

    STLLR New Member

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    Hello! I finished a new track. Any feedback would be appreciated! Thanks

     
  2. vikataur

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    you started at max energy, so it can't go anywhere.
    sub is pretty flat, could do with a little perking up.
    needs a B-part get the loop brace out and your beat and jam something new.
     
  3. P.Y.S

    P.Y.S New Member

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    like the sound id try the sub bass a bit lower tho, maybe 5 semi's, drums are nice
     
  4. GP Fly

    GP Fly New Member

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    Good work man!

    The higher of the sounds (the one that plays the 3 notes) in the main section sounds a bit off to me, it's quite clunky and sounds as if it may be peaking off-beat or interrupting the groove of the deeper sound slightly too early.

    Could definitely just be me though.
     
  5. Dark Lizardro

    Dark Lizardro The Lizard that has a hammer Staff Member

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    Hey man!

    I'd start this more quietly and blow it full force after the drop. As said above, you started with too much energy. Think about a dancefloor: people use the intros, breakdowns and outros to rest, just before the DJ throws another drop and they get mad. Keep that in mind and you should be fine.
     
  6. STLLR

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    thanks for the feedback guys! much appreciated