Some advice?

[Prinziee]

I made this "track" a few days ago but don't know if this has any potential or not.
If any one has some advice to improve the sounddesign, i would be very grateful!

This is the track:

https://soundcloud.com/prinziee%2Fprinziee-stars-preview

 

[TinnitusD&B]

The contrast between the drums is off. The kick and snare sound too muddy yet the hi hat sounds quite crisp. You need to have the drums sounding like one big kit rather than lots of separate elements thrown together. The main challenge is finding the right sounds. If you have a kick hitting around 100Hz and a snare hitting around the 200Hz mark that will from a good baseline. Then EQ and compress to get the desired sound.

Keep at it man!

https://soundcloud.com/tinnitusdnb%2Faquarius

https://soundcloud.com/tinnitusdnb%2Fback-in

 

[CTJake]

It's a neat idea and getting some good vibes, but have a look into EQing; it makes everything so much easier when you understand how to give everything it's own place.