RVERBAL - SCREAM [breakbeat]

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  1. greyson

    greyson VERBAL CITY

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    RVERBAL - SCREAM


    hello friends!
    this is my new track
    I slowed down tempo and so I created breakbeat
    I hope you like it
    please comment! :)

    thanks,
    rverbal
     
  2. TetraEleven

    TetraEleven Producer/Idiot Savant

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    That little high pitched synth that you used starting at about 0:45 was appropriate to use in the build-up (although I would tweak it a little bit, I wasn't totally sold on how it sounded), but I wouldn't have used that same synth at about 1:24, instead try to make a little variation on it and then maybe put it in the drop.

    I think that was the only thing I feel qualified to point out, and besides that I thought the track was great! The percussion, pads, and vocal samples were done quite well IMO.
     
  3. greyson

    greyson VERBAL CITY

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    thanks for your opinion. it can be very useful!

    EVERYBODY! IF YOU LISTENED THIS - PLEASE COMMENT!


     
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  4. greyson

    greyson VERBAL CITY

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    come on guys! a lot of views and no reviews? :(
     
  5. Fishy:)

    Fishy:) Active Member VIP Junglist

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    Try commenting on other peoples tracks:)
    And nice man really feelin this tune;P
     
  6. greyson

    greyson VERBAL CITY

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    thank you very much, fishy! :)
     
  7. Alex_Dillon

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    Nice tune. I like the FX samps.

    Like Tetraeleven said, im not too sold on the high pitch noise. I'd putting it down a pitch or octave or whatever and make it into something disgusting, it would go with your beat a lot better.

    Thats my view, anyway.
     
  8. greyson

    greyson VERBAL CITY

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    thank you alex_dillon :)
     
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    cant really add much that hasn't been said. i really like the drums, they sound nice and heavy. build and drop are nice and the mix sounds solid, but yeah, i can't get that high pitch synth out of the way in my head. it sits WAY in front of everything else. good track though
     
  10. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member VIP Junglist

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    this is cool man, but it sounds more like ember breaks to me! ;)