nother track. hope you like this one. just wait till 2/3 of the song. it gets wild around there. 
http://www.xs4all.nl/~mashbv/peet - communicate.MP3
crits, anyone?
http://www.xs4all.nl/~mashbv/peet - communicate.MP3
crits, anyone?
pnk_nd cte - communicate
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peet said:nother track. hope you like this one. just wait till 2/3 of the song. it gets wild around there.
http://www.xs4all.nl/~mashbv/peet - communicate.MP3
crits, anyone?
updated!
Dave_Akuma
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like the intro sample, but not too crazy about how you brought in the drums...everything was kinda brought in a bit abruptly, with no sense of build-up or anticipation...you sorta just threw alot of elements on the table too quickly...whoa, wasn't expecting that after the drop...didn't like that second little drop at about 2:45 at all...overall, the drums sound too thin and empty, maybe some more ghost snares or other percussion (another hat or ride or bongos maybe?) would help...i like the vocal samples...that hi-passed distorted synth needs more low-end, like a duplicate of that sound but without the hi-pass on it to give a more full sound...
Paradigm X
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- Nov 15, 2003
yup like the intro noise, but thos drums sound a nit muffled. Nice bass noise. Maybe a tad loud, as are the raah samples. Nice when the subass kicks in. in fact ignore all the biz about stuff being too loud, the drums are too quiet ! Maybe a bit of compression on them to make them a bit punchier. Weird how it all completely changes after the drop. Yeah good overall just needs a bit of work in arrangement and production. Try something like t-rack over the whole mix, and bring the drums up !
Good work !
Good work !
