Outerspace Playground (Need feedback on mixdown and song structure mainly)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by The Hex, May 7, 2009.

  1. The Hex

    The Hex Member

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    Heya guys, just finished up on a track i call Outerspace Playground. like i said in the title i could use a bit of feedback/tips/critiquing on the mix down and the song structure. but if you find anything else that you would like to bring to the table then it would be much appreciated! thanks a ton guys, hope you enjoy! :D

    Outerspace Playground
     
  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    What am I supposed to play this on? Couldn't play it.
     
  3. The Hex

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    it works with quicktime... god dammit what a pain. maybe ill fix this
     
  4. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    Subprime: If you have quicktime installed, it plays in the browser (I'm using firefox)..

    Hex: The tune seems ok, intro is nice.
    Lead Synth seems a bit plain, and the bass is not phat enough for my tastes ;)
    Oh, and nice use of FX. :)
     
  5. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    nice track, the mixdown is fine to me. i was just expecting bigger drums to come in that make the bassline duck for cover. but it's nice either way. good job hex
     
  6. The Hex

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    thanks a lot for the feedback guys. each track i finish seems to be getting a little better. you guys have made some good points by bringing up the drums and the bass. thanks again everyone! im sure your constructive criticism will help me out in the upcoming tracks! :D