Offman - Reality

[Offman]

new "work in progress" track.. any suggestion? thnx
http://soundcloud.com/offmanmusik/reality

 

[Thin and crispy]

i like this alot m8 but i think on the breaks it sounds like all you did was lower the volume on ur break, imo it would sound better low passed. the vocal also needs to come through more, let it shine through cos its wicked don't keep it hidden behind everything else i'd also think about dropping the lead for 16 bars at some point and letting the vocal and atmospherics realy do their work.

 

[prettyherb]

Nice track man. Sometimes i can't feel the bass enough. Nice vocals

 

[HyperonDnb]

the intros got a lush feel to it like the lead you have there and the drums sound solid. The drops nice, vocals are tight, liking the wobble you got ther maybe you could push the sub throuh a bit more, brilliant track mate.

Hyperon