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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by obeydnb, Feb 7, 2013.

  1. obeydnb

    obeydnb New Member

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    Hi Peeps,

    Im new to the forum, thought id post a track, hope you like it :).



    CHeers.
     
  2. djSing

    djSing Ill-usions

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    I think all the different sounds you've combined are sick, I'd just like to see the drums improved. stick some more breaks in there to make a roll a bit better. Other than that though its a tight tune, sounds like you know what you're doin! Welcome to the forum by the way, and stick around, theres a lot you can learn off the people here
     
  3. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    ahhhh my mixdowns!!!! :p

    That mellody is WAY TOO LOUD. Apart from that, every sound is perfect, just needs the right mixdown...
     
  4. obeydnb

    obeydnb New Member

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    Thanks :). Yeh i agree djSing, actually the drums do sound a bit... not all there lol.

    Thanks Neomind ill try the mixdown again tomorrow.
     
  5. Rajstah Vibe

    Rajstah Vibe soundcloud.com/rajstah

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    Hey Obey!
    Welcome onboard.
    What DAW do you use?

    Your tune in here isn't bad, the idea it can work.
    As mentioned, need to work on the mix a lot and the arrangement a bit more.

    My personal feeling is that you wanted to do a liquid track with an hard snare.
    I personally don't feel that snare on this contest.... I do like it, but not here.

    I can hear a more snappy and less punchy snare. OR> If you want to keep this snare, you gotta work more on shuffles.... more rolling.

    The melody it's spreaded all over the tune, maybe it's a bit too much. I will give at that melody a bit of rest and let the bassline breath.

    WHERE IS THE SUB?????

    Put a growling sub and youve done the track.

    keep up :)