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I think all the different sounds you've combined are sick, I'd just like to see the drums improved. stick some more breaks in there to make a roll a bit better. Other than that though its a tight tune, sounds like you know what you're doin! Welcome to the forum by the way, and stick around, theres a lot you can learn off the people here
 

Neomind

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ahhhh my mixdowns!!!! :p

That mellody is WAY TOO LOUD. Apart from that, every sound is perfect, just needs the right mixdown...
 

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Hey Obey!
Welcome onboard.
What DAW do you use?

Your tune in here isn't bad, the idea it can work.
As mentioned, need to work on the mix a lot and the arrangement a bit more.

My personal feeling is that you wanted to do a liquid track with an hard snare.
I personally don't feel that snare on this contest.... I do like it, but not here.

I can hear a more snappy and less punchy snare. OR> If you want to keep this snare, you gotta work more on shuffles.... more rolling.

The melody it's spreaded all over the tune, maybe it's a bit too much. I will give at that melody a bit of rest and let the bassline breath.

WHERE IS THE SUB?????

Put a growling sub and youve done the track.

keep up :)
 
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