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- Thread starter obeydnb
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Ill-usions
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I think all the different sounds you've combined are sick, I'd just like to see the drums improved. stick some more breaks in there to make a roll a bit better. Other than that though its a tight tune, sounds like you know what you're doin! Welcome to the forum by the way, and stick around, theres a lot you can learn off the people here
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- Location
- Madrid, Spain
ahhhh my mixdowns!!!! 
That mellody is WAY TOO LOUD. Apart from that, every sound is perfect, just needs the right mixdown...
That mellody is WAY TOO LOUD. Apart from that, every sound is perfect, just needs the right mixdown...
- Joined
- Jan 14, 2011
- Location
- London
Hey Obey!
Welcome onboard.
What DAW do you use?
Your tune in here isn't bad, the idea it can work.
As mentioned, need to work on the mix a lot and the arrangement a bit more.
My personal feeling is that you wanted to do a liquid track with an hard snare.
I personally don't feel that snare on this contest.... I do like it, but not here.
I can hear a more snappy and less punchy snare. OR> If you want to keep this snare, you gotta work more on shuffles.... more rolling.
The melody it's spreaded all over the tune, maybe it's a bit too much. I will give at that melody a bit of rest and let the bassline breath.
WHERE IS THE SUB?????
Put a growling sub and youve done the track.
keep up
Welcome onboard.
What DAW do you use?
Your tune in here isn't bad, the idea it can work.
As mentioned, need to work on the mix a lot and the arrangement a bit more.
My personal feeling is that you wanted to do a liquid track with an hard snare.
I personally don't feel that snare on this contest.... I do like it, but not here.
I can hear a more snappy and less punchy snare. OR> If you want to keep this snare, you gotta work more on shuffles.... more rolling.
The melody it's spreaded all over the tune, maybe it's a bit too much. I will give at that melody a bit of rest and let the bassline breath.
WHERE IS THE SUB?????
Put a growling sub and youve done the track.
keep up
