DnB new track with some tekky sounds NEED ADVICE!

[Rajstah Vibe]

Hi guys!
I've been spending load of time on this track... and as usual, when happen this, i make too much mess here n there...
Any advice for sound, arrange, mix...?

https://soundcloud.com/rajstahclips%2Ftwo-days-mix-masterstrip

Cheers!

---------- Post added at 17:42 ---------- Previous post was at 17:28 ----------

Nothing?!

 

[DJ Noobe]

Wow ! Fool Sound ! I don't know how to say, the mix seems to be good, and all the sounds too.
Great job !

 

[brutality]

haha man I think you're too hard on yourself. This is pretty good!

The thing that would make it AWESOME (in my opinion), would be a Noisia style resampled bassline. The beats, aggressive feel, etc, all make me expect one to just ROAR at me! Your current main bassline isn't necessarily bad, but a nasty Resampled, fast-moving bassline might do the track better. What setup/DAW are you running?

 

[Rajstah Vibe]

i use Ableton Live 8.2... I have some external gears, but i'm lazy and just using plugs!