new track...pay attention

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by collymore, Apr 14, 2010.

  1. collymore

    collymore Member

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    Had some usefull feedback on previous tracks, so I thought I would give it a go and ask for comments on this track called "pay attention". A bit different style than my other tracks.

    http://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar

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  2. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    nice one, check your soundcloud timed comments on this song for feedback
     
  3. collymore

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    Thanks for feedback....and yes I am over doing it a bit with the uaahhhh. To be honest I started out with even more uahhhhh.
     
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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    scary then
     
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    Sounds really nice, but for my taste, the drums are a bit to loud and the bass in not punshing enough.
    But concept and the sounds are relly nice.
     
  6. collymore

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    thanks...I will have look on the drums...you might have a point on the bass...cheers