Ok so overall it's not a great tune, but considering it's your first that's to be expected.
But it's not all bad, the highlights are:
1: Your kick and snare hit hard. The compression is very apparent, but that's not always a bad thing.
2: I quite like the mid bass sound you're using. Needs a bit more variation to make it more musically interesting though and you need to learn how to layer a sub under your mid bass. This would help fill out the sound more.