I would suggest adding more elements to your track to make it more interesting. Also spend some time with layering and eq to help those elements sit in the mix as the tune is on the hollow and flat side of things. Keep at it brother
Ok so overall it's not a great tune, but considering it's your first that's to be expected.
But it's not all bad, the highlights are:
1: Your kick and snare hit hard. The compression is very apparent, but that's not always a bad thing.
2: I quite like the mid bass sound you're using. Needs a bit more variation to make it more musically interesting though and you need to learn how to layer a sub under your mid bass. This would help fill out the sound more.