New project...Please help

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by dj mirry, May 12, 2013.

  1. dj mirry

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    Hi guys...Ive been producing for about five months now and this is my second track I've uploaded

    I'm in need of some massive feedback on what to do to get the best from this project i am working on.

    I know i have a lot to learn, and would appreciate any constructive criticism

    thanks guys

    http://yourlisten.com/channel/content/16981761/hack_and_slash
     
  2. dj mirry

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  3. MisterApe

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    The high hats sound kind of muddy to me.
     
  4. Kopacetic

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    It definitely needs a lot of work. Add a sidechaining pad to the kick, and also a reese bass. Also like MisterApe said, the hats are a bit muddy.