New producer - New track - better mixdown? need experienced opinions! thanks!

[duppymanDnB]

Hey guys! I just upd a track on this forum a few days ago and everyone liked it but all agreed the mixdown needed work. I just finished my latest tune today and wanted to know if my mixdown was better, or good for that matter.. Thanks for the help thus far! I can see this forum being as helpful as ever, already!

http://soundcloud.com/duppyman/boogaloo

 

[logikz]

great mixdown and a very cool loop but really boring tune, nothing happens. so id recommend working out some variations and new parts and transitions now that you got the basics down.