New in the Field

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by fanatic, Oct 10, 2014.

  1. fanatic

    fanatic New Member

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    Hello everybody!

    I bet you have heard this thousand times, but I just finished my first "actual" track I have been working on for quite some time and I guess here I will get some really good feedback if you guys are willing to give it !

    Tracks here:


    It would be awesome if you could tell me your opinion, what's good and what to improve. I know that I need to improve my drums already.

    Looking forward to hearing from you,
    Cheers
    Fanatic
     
  2. tweo

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    I like the intro and the song progression. cheers m8
     
  3. fanatic

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    Thanks mate. Appreciate it!
     
  4. eloy santiago

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    the track in itself is quite nice , but for my taste you try to pile up too many sounds in the same frequency range.. the cheesy synth, the distorted bass and the talking lead all at the same time seem to be fighting for space.. this would gain a lot of clarity if you would use the instruments a little more sparsely.. most listeners will focus on the vocals anyway..just my two cents..