New here, need some help sorting what I have to focus on~

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ToruWara, Sep 27, 2014.

  1. ToruWara

    ToruWara New Member

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    Been working on this for the last week, but not yet quite used to my new DAW... Just wondered if someone could quickly pinpoint the areas I should be focusing on regarding this track?
    https://soundcloud.com/toru-wara/white-fields-wip

    Cheers~
     
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  2. Indifference

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    Link is broken mate otherwise would love to help
     
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    Wow, sry, fixed the link...
     
  4. Indifference

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    no problem mate. Well after listening to most of your tracks. I have got to say your music sounds so clean and polished even down to your drums. Well done mate takes alot to get that far. But and I'm sorry to say as I'm sure your aware your bass is pretty poor and needs alot of attention. I'm just saying what i hear. My music isn't perfect by any means. Maybe worth a quick search on youtube about bass and eqing it in your daw as i use reason and couldn't really advice whats going wrong for your bass. Overall I'm loving your sound as it opens up a real new world of music i would have never comprehended :)
     
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    Thank you, no need to be worried I'd take offence. But thanks, really is nice hearing that, and will definitely look up various tutorials on bass-design and mixing :)
     
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    You've got the drums, now you need the BASS. I suggest sampling from dub and even rock; the Verve had some good, simple basslines on their "Northern Soul" album