New FREE 320 dnb song/s. Feedback appreciated too.

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Hi, I've been here before with my 2 dnb songs - here's my newest which you can listen too here and download it for free.
http://bograt.bandcamp.com/track/glitch-in-the-system
The tune is called "glitch in the system". I tried something different compared to my last two dnb songs which are more generic.

Here's the two older ones if you're interested:
http://bograt.bandcamp.com/track/ocean-blue
http://bograt.bandcamp.com/track/neon-lights

Please download and help a young producer out :)
Also check out my grime/dubstep songs on there, such as "Flags of the sky" my new dubstep tune.

What are your thoughts too?

Thanks - peace.
 
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Glitch in the System....
The bassline seems to be off-key in the beginning....
Also work on your transition. Otherwise it sounds like a bunch of random loops put in line.
Percussion is also v e r y weak.

Needs some tweaking there...


~Shades out.
 
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