hi gabs, thanks for sharing your track. i like the intro, sounds interesting to me.
imo, the chords and bass sound is kinda off (from 1min), maybe you can look into freq., scoop some out in the mids (i.e. 500hz region).
the piano in the breaks needs to be turned down quite a bit, also add some affects (i.e. delay or reverb).
other than that a nice track with lots of potential, i like the easy going vibe, go on developing this one further

PS: the instrumental version sounds far better, the vocals need work, don't match imo
