New Dnb track check it out

[gregorkarbowski]

Hi Guys give me some feedback pls https://soundcloud.com/gregorkarbowski%2Fstraight-hardcore

 

[RECollection]

i feel like im at a theme park..

 

[gregorkarbowski]

thanks for listening did you like it?

 

[DeeGun]

This sounds like it was done two decades ago.

In a good way.

 

[gregorkarbowski]

it was meant to be like the neuro funk in the 00 so thanks for that comment

 

[DeeGun]

Don't want to disappoint you mate but it sounds more like Mulder or Aphrodite.

The Urban Takeover kinda jump up.

 

[gregorkarbowski]

no problem i think i have my own sound at all that`s something not everyone can say on themself

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

its a fun vibe, and the mix seems to generally work. some of your lines feel a tad bit predictable but this works in the context of this style of dnb imo.

 

[gregorkarbowski]

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[maschinistom]

funky vibe, made my head bounce quite a bit ...
sound-wise there is a lot that could be done with this track ..
anyway .. good work man !!

 

[gregorkarbowski]

thanks for listening but tell me what would you do sound wise? be constructive

 

[maschinistom]

thanks for listening but tell me what would you do sound wise? be constructive

needs more bass imo. could be the speakers I'm on right now. also, pls look at the 500hz and 800hz region, possible to scoop some? the snare is not coming though, pls check.
otherwise sounds good. again, I like the speedy funky vibe .. this is across very well!

 

[gregorkarbowski]

even more bass i allready put up the loudness and used pink noise to get the balance right i heard it on diverent soundsystems and it sounded right to me... but i look into it thanks for the feedback

 

[RECollection]

thanks for listening did you like it?

yessir
low end could be beefed up.
not a finished track imo.

 

[gregorkarbowski]

low end could be beefed up.

Any suggestions