Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Xenofish, Jun 21, 2014.
Hey guys, here a new track. This time it's a bit simpler than my other tracks.
It could use with a proper buildup, both in the intro and the breakdown, it's making the tune sound less enjoyable at the moment.
Following on that...
Why not highpass the bass or just remove the sub in the build up before the drop?
Also there's not enough variation in there to keep it interesting for 8 mins. This might sound a bit drastic, but if you make every 8 bar section 4 bars and every 16 bar section 8 bars and so on, this might add some energy and keep it moving. Try it at least, it won't be too hard to put back if it sounds bad.
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