intro pad is quite nice. melody at .23 is out of key. at .44 the pad turns out to be out of key with the rest. vocal is nice. bass-synth sounds good to me too. drums could use some work for sure, im not really into those hats. some layered break would do better i guess. composition is fluffy, i think it works. with the drums sorted out and the harmonics fixed in the intro and breakdown it could be a sweet tune i think