My First DnB Track :)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Strobe, Apr 15, 2011.

  1. Strobe

    Strobe New Member

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    Im 14 years old and have been producing dubstep for quite a while now. But now i decided to make my first full dnb song.

    here is the link on youtube its 1080p: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=90NnwhRTNFw

    Tell me what yous think ? :)
     
  2. Nautilus

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    For 14 I would be pretty damn proud of myself, hats off to you. Production quality is fine (better than me at the moment), however the composition of the 4 note cycling is overdone. Kick could be stronger, not a fan of the snare. Without any mixups in timing, it gets repetitive really fast. Keep it coming!
     
  3. Strobe

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    thanks for the feedback
     
  4. kuthoerrr89

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    Wow i was pretty suprised actually, good track, its pretty solid on the production side. Keep on working the way you do mate ;)
     
  5. DOOVD

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    good tune, where you from in scotland?
     
  6. Kaz1983

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    Was gonna say something along those lines... wish I had of started producing at a young age.. haha...
     
  7. Strobe

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    This is very good for your first track and being 14:p congrats man;P musical its not very good and so on and ye but ye just keep doing it and u will be great
     
  9. greyson

    greyson VERBAL CITY

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    as the first track is really very good. possible that you have talent. I look forward to the next tracks. check your inbox on youtube! :)