My first attempt, another Tap Ho remix

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by skywalker_G, Jan 13, 2013.

  1. skywalker_G

    skywalker_G Member

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    Alright guys,

    After a long wait, I've finally got my new computer so I can now get into production.

    This is my first real attempt at writing a tune and I would really appreciate some feedback because, as you can probably tell, I need all the help I can get!


    Thanks in advance :)


     
  2. DjCartel

    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    i have to say a few things. firstly, you score top marks for originality with this remix. out of all the ones ive heard this is probably the most original sounding idea. it actually stands out to me. does need some changes tho! the drums get repetitive very quickly, try switching them up a little bit. the bass is really nice, just needs "beefing" up a little. with a bit of work this could be sick. good work man
     
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    yea, I agree with DjCartel, quite original and I like the rolling bass. Keep it up man!
     
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    Agreed with carthelö yeah.
    Drums needs change and base could use a little touch.
    BUt the songs structure is quite original yea
    keep up the good work
     
  5. Elzerk

    Elzerk 00111100 00110011

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    "Base" fucking love it.
     
  6. anikom15

    anikom15 New Member

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    THIS IS WHACK. The good whack.
     
  7. skywalker_G

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    Thanks for all the feedback, it's a huge help! Working away at the moment but looking forward to jumping back on this next week

    Any ideas on how i should go about beefing up the bass?