Drum & Bass LUairs - Sub Touch (Good enough?) [Please some Advices]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by simsoonas, Jan 7, 2012.

  1. simsoonas

    simsoonas New Member

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    Soooo, i mostly create House music and other styles, but now tried DNB.
    i know its not perfect, i can't make middle of the song, it have to change somehow, another melody, another beat....
    but if i change something, everything goes wrong... and ENDING.. its horrible. need help with it, or some lessons.

    [video=youtube_share;niaECxU4YBA]http://youtu.be/niaECxU4YBA[/video]
     
  2. Balthazaar

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    Tune is good but in beginning when beat kicks in it just plays for short time,and your drop is to long imo,not to much dynamic things try adding that same beat you got but without shuffle and occasionally some bass so that listeners know what to expect..Nice vid btw..
     
  3. simsoonas

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    thx, but isn't its better when listener dont know what to expect? i thought surprising them is better