liquid101

maschinistom

Well-Known Member
VIP Junglist
Messages
1,188
Likes
398
#2
hello iot, thx for submitting ur newest track. i like the vibe and atmosphere, the chord pads sound really lovely. the main two melodies (piano and synth lead) needs to be way more embedded in the master sound. try to EQ those down to sit better in the mix. also some variations woudl help. and the drums needs work, sound a bit untouched for now. otherwise an nice tune that can sound really well when fully built. go in working on this, would love to hear the final track! :2thumbs:
 

MentalFrame

Active Member
Messages
135
Likes
71
#3
As said before, the main leads are not part of your track, especially the synth lead.
And there's a massive lack of bass.
The pad is nice though. Try working on your leads, and bass, and this could be a dope track!
 

alexanthony

Impact (Engage Audio)
Messages
481
Likes
33
#4
got potential for sure, some nice sounds in there. Mirroring the above, needs some work with the drums and im not feeling the high pitched synthy sound that comes from 35 secs and then throughout. Im feeling the rest though!
 
Top