[Liquid/Vocals] Looking for critical feedback on production & arrangement

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Laney UK, Jul 15, 2014.

  1. Laney UK

    Laney UK Member

    Jan 29, 2013
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    Brighton UK
    Hey all,

    I've been flirting with music production for ages but never really put much time into it. Too busy collecting vinyl and playing video games...
    Anyhow, this is one of the first things I've been happy enough with to actually put out there for some feedback.

    I am by far my own worst critic so please feel free to tell it like it is. I am not looking for praise, I just want to know how to get better.

    • What's right & wrong with my sounds?
    • What's right & wrong with my production/engineering?
    • What's right & wrong with my arrangement?

    To give some framing, this is (possibly) a liquid sort of thing with some vocals over most of the track. (Not mine.) Also I have to mix down on headphones. (Beyerdynamic DT 250's.) This is unavoidable, given my life situation right now.

    I have no particular interest in getting my tunes signed, or even played out, but I do want to learn.