''Junkers'' - a bit darker dnb track

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Cyclopyze, Sep 15, 2011.

  1. Cyclopyze

    Cyclopyze Member

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    My latest work, sounds very clear on my phones / laptop speakers but I wouldn't mind another set of ears for that.

    I appreciate any feedback: levels, sounds,composition, good / bad etc.

    Also, this is the 1. time I used a vocal sample so if I did someting wrong there plz let me know.







    Thx in advance :)
     
  2. subprime

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    That lead synth being panned slightly left makes me feel unbalanced or a bit wrong or something. Found it hard to listen to. Apart from that, sounds ok. It's not what I would consider dark tho.
     
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    That lead synth sounds awesome, I agree with subprime about the panning tho
     
  4. Cyclopyze

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    Thx for the feedback

    Ye I know this track ain't rly that dark but i find kinda hard to put a label on mah tracks so for all purposes of creating this thread I just slammed the 1 couse of the synth and that vocal.

    As for the panning of the lead, I just figured it was due to ozone's stereo imaging, now that's out of the way and i re-uploaded it, should be centered now.
     
  5. RUSSLA

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    Sick idea man, really feeling the synth aswell! think the snare could be a bit louder in the mix and maybe layered up with a 200hz snare. just my opinion tho :)
     
  6. luciduk

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    easy bro, really love the talking bass sound!! bad man!!

    drums need more flow together tho, the snare drum sounds str8 cut out of a break or something!!