Jump up track in progress

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by dj mirry, Mar 3, 2013.

  1. dj mirry

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    Hi guys!...i'm currently working on a track called "i killed you"

    I'm a complete beginner at this producing thing and was just wondering if i could get tips and feed back on this track i am working on? Is it bad? should i scrap it? Am i using the wrongs sounds etc...

    Thanks guys

    https://soundcloud.com/dj-miracle-2/i-kill-you
     
  2. dj mirry

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    really could do with some help :(
     
  3. Sweaty Teddy

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    Not really a big jump up fan but production wise I don't actually think it sounds too bad especially if you're new at this, kick and snare could punch through a bit more possibly change the samples but obviously thats more a personal prefrence thing though, bass sounds nice for what you'd expect from jump up although some of the jump up heads on here would possibly disagree, the tune needs a bit more variation in there, it's something I struggle with quite a bit myself often get stuck in a 4 bar loop and I think the tune is a bit generic but you're new mate, keep going if this is your early efforts can see you getting good quite fast.
     
  4. dj mirry

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    Thanks for the feedback mate
     
  5. Mr_DnB

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    Is it me or does the link not work??