JMB - NEW TUNE - STRING PLUCKER, UPDATED

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by joe_mb, May 25, 2008.

  1. joe_mb

    joe_mb JMB

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    safe ppl
    started this about a week ago, hadn't got round to updating it til today
    i only had bout a minute of it uploaded before, its a got a full structure now if anyone would care to have alisten
    would be much appreciated
    cheers
    its called stringplucker
    myspace.com/jmbdjuk
     
  2. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    right off - the mix of the strings and pad dont sound like they fit
    try cutting some decay off the pad and delay it a bit also the strings sound like they are in a diffrent key
    like the bass sound and fx that go with it
    as for the drums the line running over the amen sounds good but i find when im trying to get definition on top of amen patterns that its better to have a short sharp snare to compliment
    just personal opinions but tis a nice tune
     
  3. joe_mb

    joe_mb JMB

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    cheers for that mate
    i dunno what pad you mean at the begining, its only strings and drums
    du mean the rise..?
    ye i think your right abuot the snare, need to cut the tail off it a bit
    ye they are in different keys, but using the same root note... its a modulatiion
    i know, it does sound a bit weird at the breakdown, think im gona change that actually
    but ye cheers for the feedback anyway mate, very much appreciated.
     
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    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    no worries bro
     
  5. joe_mb

    joe_mb JMB

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