JMB - NEW TUNE - STRING PLUCKER, UPDATED

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safe ppl
started this about a week ago, hadn't got round to updating it til today
i only had bout a minute of it uploaded before, its a got a full structure now if anyone would care to have alisten
would be much appreciated
cheers
its called stringplucker
myspace.com/jmbdjuk
 

vickvega

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right off - the mix of the strings and pad dont sound like they fit
try cutting some decay off the pad and delay it a bit also the strings sound like they are in a diffrent key
like the bass sound and fx that go with it
as for the drums the line running over the amen sounds good but i find when im trying to get definition on top of amen patterns that its better to have a short sharp snare to compliment
just personal opinions but tis a nice tune
 
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cheers for that mate
i dunno what pad you mean at the begining, its only strings and drums
du mean the rise..?
ye i think your right abuot the snare, need to cut the tail off it a bit
ye they are in different keys, but using the same root note... its a modulatiion
i know, it does sound a bit weird at the breakdown, think im gona change that actually
but ye cheers for the feedback anyway mate, very much appreciated.
 
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