I Wish Everyday Was Like This (Work In Progress) - Crypticz

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  1. parsons19

    parsons19 Active Member

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    Howdy,

    Today was sunny. I had no school. So, I made a happy tune! :) Kind of Future Garage/House this one I guess.

    Mixdown is everywhere right now, the sun can make you lazy too ;) Hope you enjoy it!



    Jordan
     
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    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    Yeah sounds really cool man.

    Might be just me but everything sounded a bit squished to me, like the elements of the track didn't have much room to breathe, if that makes sense :p

    Good stuff man
     
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    Thanks for the comment man, I am actually hearing what you say now you mention it :) Some stuff is clipping and some stuff ain't quite loud enough so hopefully I will be able to sort it out when I try make it sound pretty :p
     
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    T:M Dusty Techno Workout

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    This is massive man! Totally feeling this! I agree elmaruk about everything seeming like it doesn't have room to breathe, but I'm sure this will be fixed once you sort out the mixdown. Only critical bit I have is that I would switch back to the Garage beat after a while in the second half, don't just leave it as a house beat, or maybe take some rhythm elements from both. This is my favorite work of yours to date!
     
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    Thanks very much mate! :) Yeah I was listening again earlier and the house beat gets a bit samey come the end. Think I will end on a mish mash of both the beats and see what happens :)

    And as for it being your fav work, thanks a lot again! My next release is going to be focused on the dark/deep side of Bass Music (Dubsteppyish I guess) but perhaps I will throw together a few more of this Futurey Housey whatever tunes :) I did have quite a cool one saved somewhere with some producer from the USA ;)
     
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    Very nice mate, enjoyed that... Does get a bit samey after the drop, and like what's been mentioned already, switching the beat back would help a lot.. Good effort though
     
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    digging it, nice vibe in there. looking forward to hear it when its done (mixdown, eq, etc...), really like the dreamy synth-line ^^
     
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    Safe guys, cheers for the responses ! :D