You have the bones of dirty tune needs some more stabs / noises along the way as it's a little repetitive but as you say its not finished. Also at 2.41 and after its sounds like the sub bass is a little high in the mix on my
speakers. Thats just my opinion and im no expert
Check out my tune on its on the same page as this one BLOWA - Brainfreeze and see what ya think.