How to improve?

[Melophobia]

I recently started making jump up dnb and I was wondering if anybody could give me some pointers. This is the most recent tune I've made, feedback on it would be great too
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIqDiZloAg0

 

[Innovine]

Start by posting it in the correct forum

 

[Verva]

I personally wouldnt have nursery rhymes for my intro.