hi guys.. new to dnb forum

Sweaty Teddy

Nob'ed
VIP Junglist
Messages
1,641
Likes
59
#4
Not a bad attempt mate but not a fan of the pitch shifted vocals and it seems like the samples a bit off but not really sure. I'm sure someone more knowledgable will give a better view , keep up the work.
 

subprime

Dysjoint
VIP Junglist
Messages
3,085
Likes
94
#6
Yeah, the syncing of the samples is a bit out. I'm also not too big on the vocal, but keep at it. Takes a bit of time to get it all together.
 

MattDMA

DnB Idiot
Messages
384
Likes
0
#7
samples definatly out of sync...
that vocal sounds like its come out of some reali awful hardcore track man, id well scrap it but thats just my opinion
 

TongueFlap

Flappin'
VIP Junglist
Messages
3,836
Likes
8
#9
yeh man for a 1st attempt it isint bad.
couple of things tho,
get rid of the vocals :) chipmunks are not ftw lol
layer up your drums more, make them sound beefy. add in some extra kicks, snares etc etc.
add some extra bits into the intro, pads, effects. get me?
 

Protoplasym

Nuskool
VIP Junglist
Messages
987
Likes
34
#11
I'm not liking the pitched up voc. The guitar sounds weird... like it was improperly warp markered... dunno. If it was intentional, then nevermind me.

The last note on the bassline is dissonant sounding to me... again, if it's intentional, nevermind me.


:keepworkingatit:
 
Top