hi guys.. new to dnb forum

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by LIQUID ONE, Sep 16, 2009.

  1. LIQUID ONE

    LIQUID ONE New Member

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    i am working on my frist track. i have always wanted to pro dnb. i gave it a shot. so far i got the intro and frist drop not sure if intro is too long. please give me feedback.. thanks


    http://soundcloud.com/liquid-one/still-11
     
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  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Linkage fail.
     
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    Not a bad attempt mate but not a fan of the pitch shifted vocals and it seems like the samples a bit off but not really sure. I'm sure someone more knowledgable will give a better view , keep up the work.
     
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    any more feedback guys
     
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    Yeah, the syncing of the samples is a bit out. I'm also not too big on the vocal, but keep at it. Takes a bit of time to get it all together.
     
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    MattDMA DnB Idiot

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    samples definatly out of sync...
    that vocal sounds like its come out of some reali awful hardcore track man, id well scrap it but thats just my opinion
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    yeh samples dont mach the tempo of drums..
     
  9. TongueFlap

    TongueFlap Flappin'

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    yeh man for a 1st attempt it isint bad.
    couple of things tho,
    get rid of the vocals :) chipmunks are not ftw lol
    layer up your drums more, make them sound beefy. add in some extra kicks, snares etc etc.
    add some extra bits into the intro, pads, effects. get me?
     
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    also, make sure it is all in time :)
     
  11. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    I'm not liking the pitched up voc. The guitar sounds weird... like it was improperly warp markered... dunno. If it was intentional, then nevermind me.

    The last note on the bassline is dissonant sounding to me... again, if it's intentional, nevermind me.


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