Not bad for a first attempt. I like the vocal-y bits over it. For me, it could do with more contrast between the parts. Clearer intro, drop, main, breakdown, 2nd drop kinda thing. The intro sounds like its been quite over streched. Ableton warp?
Hi mate - Just gave this a listen and although the style not necessarily my cup of tea, I though the track was very good. It sounds crisp, I like the intro and really like the bass sounds. Very nice 1st effort mate