Drum & Bass Flight of the Dragon... 1st track posted on forum/online, is it up to scratch?

http://Soundcloud.com/inazonemusic/flight-of-the-dragon

Hey DnbForum,

Here is my first drum and bass track i have posted online, any feedback would be much appreciated.

Enjoy

 

Not bad for a first attempt. I like the vocal-y bits over it. For me, it could do with more contrast between the parts. Clearer intro, drop, main, breakdown, 2nd drop kinda thing. The intro sounds like its been quite over streched. Ableton warp?

James

 

hey dude,

Cheers for feedback I agree with what your saying, good to have another perspective! I used delay designer on Logic to give the intro that effect but could probably do with some fine tuning.

 

Hi mate - Just gave this a listen and although the style not necessarily my cup of tea, I though the track was very good. It sounds crisp, I like the intro and really like the bass sounds. Very nice 1st effort mate

 

Got a nice vibe to it

Drums are a littlw weak, the snare doesnt really have any weight to it at all.
Rolls nicely though
Nice vocal hits behind it all, and its in key

Good work