First produced Jungle Track...... so need some advice and comments !!!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Rouky, Jan 12, 2015.

  1. Rouky

    Rouky New Member

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    Hello everyone,

    I need some advice for my first old school jungle tune done with fruity loops. I'm still learning tricks with this program so every comment is good to take !!
    Do you find it good ? transitions ? instruments ? intro, outro and main bass ?

    I wanted it to sounds like coooool and smooth jungle... :fonz2:

    Thanx and take care !

    https://soundcloud.com/mathieu-rouky/facing-the-pier
     
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    ND4SPDMW11 VGM Enthusiast

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    Personally, It's too slow for my taste. I would make it a lot faster, like at 166 BPM for jungle. I like the pad, but I don't really like the high attack level you put on it TBH.

    Though, for a first jungle track, not bad :)
     
  3. Rouky

    Rouky New Member

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    Thanks for the advice, it's always usefull said like that ! :2thumbs: It's hard for me to have some objective point of view as i'm workin on...

    I'll put some more speed on it (it was at 170 bpm btw) and turn down the pad. You're right about that.

    Keep on rockin mate !
     
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    artistcalled6 New Member

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    I think it's pretty good. I could have gone with a little more bass drum but if you were going for cool and smooth I think you nailed it.
     
  5. Rouky

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    Thank you man, the bass and drum is for the next one i'm on but this one is not mastered yet so everything is possible then !